There
was once a beautiful young woman who lived in a village just like all
others. The woman was beautiful beyond
comparison and there was no other to match her likeness. As will often happen with beautiful young
women, many fell in love with her. In particular
there were three suitors who took an exceptional interest in the woman.
However,
tragedy struck and the woman fell to a horrible disease. There was never any indication of who would
have won over the woman’s heart. Between
the three suitors all were of equal wealth, knowledge, and talent. However, all three mourned for her in very
different ways.
The
first suitor had fallen in love with her mind.
Therefore to commemorate her death he traveled far and wide seeking to
attain higher knowledge.
The
second had fallen in love with her virtue.
Therefore, in efforts to preserve her purity he raised her name to the
heavens so that she could remain blessed.
The
third had fallen in love with her. Not
with any one specific attribute, the third suitor loved her so whole-heartedly
that his world was black in her death.
He mourned by living at the cemetery where she rest, begging for a
living.
When
the woman’s family came to give away her worldly possessions they found a
letter written in their daughter’s script “To My Love”. Surely the letter was for one of the three
suitors but they couldn’t determine which.
After seeing the ways in which they mourned they determined it could be
only the third suitor. As he loved their
daughter in all accounts and did not see her as one-dimensional, rather he saw
her in all aspects of life as beautiful.
Author’s
Note: This story is loosely based on TheThree Lovers from my story unit this week.
In the original story the story of the three lovers is introduced by a
goblin. The goblin is telling the story
to a King as part of a riddle. In the
original story the first suitor uses his knowledge to bring the woman back to
life and the problem of who she should marry arises. The King answers the riddle by analyzing the
means by which each man grieved for the loss of the woman. He answered the man who lay by her grave,
because he mourned for her as a lover should.
The King was correct in his answer.
Although, I think there should have been somewhat more of a debate about
the matter. I rewrote my story without
the woman coming to life in the end because I think if I were the third suitor
I wouldn’t want to disturb the dead.
People often pose the theory that if we could wake the dead that they
would be different. I think it is best
that they remain passed on and therefore didn’t bring her back in my
story.
Bibliography:
Twenty Two Goblins
Arthur W. Ryder
1917
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