Wednesday, April 15, 2015

Storytelling Post: The Mouse, The Bird, and The Sausage

Once upon a rugby field there was a fly-half, an inside center, and an outside center.  In this rugby field the fly-half was essentially the quarterback, and she called all of the plays and lead the back line as the first ball carrier.  The inside center was the middle woman, she had the option to pass out to the outside or back in to the fly-half, she was quick and could run the ball without fail.  The outside-center was the quickest of the three, as the last in line when she got the ball it was ideal that she would break free and make long runs with the ball.  All three players worked together to form an excellent connection.  Their plays were spot on and they formed an excellent team on and off the pitch.

One day the fly-half went to an elite performance camp where she trained with coaches and players from all around the world.  When she came back to her inside and outside centers in the next match she tried to run the line utilizing plays she had learned while she was gone.  As the quarterback of the line her centers had no choice but to follow her lead.  However, with the new plays and new style of organization the two centers couldn’t predict passes like they usually could. 

As the match went on the fly-half would go on to botch passes to her centers that would lead to high tackles, ruined plays, and failed lines.  The weakness in the connection would ultimately lead to the ruin of the line and the failure of the team. 

My outside center, me (fly-half), and my inside center.
Post Game Photo



Authors Note:  This story is based on The Mouse,The Bird, and The Sausage.  The original story is about a mouse a bird and a sausage who all live together in a house.  The trio works together day in and day out to make the household work.   Each performs an individualized task that’s specialized to their particular skills.  At the end of each day their tasks come together to support one another and create a livable situation for the three of them.  Then one day the bird goes out to venture on his tasks and meets another bird.  The second bird convinces the first to go home and change the ways he organizes the household.  When the three try to change things without communicating they all die.  Seriously, that’s the ending, they all die.  My story took the more athletic and sports approach to the story.  In rugby a backline is players who all rely on knowing the skills and strengths of one another.  The flyhalf inside and outside connection is extremely important to the success of the line.  A team without a strong connection will not have a successful backline, and a team that doesn’t communicate will certainly fail. 

Bibliography:
Book- Fairy Tales by the Brother Grimm
Author- The Brothers Grimm
Year- 1912

6 comments:

  1. Rachel, I like how you incorporated the sport you played into your story for this week. It was extremely original and very well written. I also learned some rugby terms I was not aware of. I honestly have not attended an OU rugby game or any rugby game for that matter. After reading your story I will have to. Well done!

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  2. Rachel, thanks for the great story. This was great! It was very well written and well developed. Plus, I always love a story that involves sports! I think it is cool that you are using your own picture of rugby, it really adds a lot to your story. Thanks for the good read!

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  3. What a creative spin you put on this story. I liked how you tied it into something you love and are passionate about. Knowing that you enjoy rugby before hand from your introduction made this story that much more enjoyable for me. The personal touch was really nice, and it still kept within the original story. Great job on it all.

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  4. I thought it was really clever of you to take the message of the story and apply it directly to your life. It's a pretty easy to take a story and just adapt it slightly and retell it, but you had to come up with your whole own story while just maintaining the message. Great job!

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  5. I really liked how you incorporated your passion of rugby and applied it to a storytelling post! Very cool. I don't know much about rugby but when you equated the fly-half to the quarterback of a football team it all made more sense! I like your ending better than everyone dying. That just seems like an inappropriate ending compared to just the team losing. Good job!

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  6. You did such a good job with this story, Rachel! I like that you made it more personal making the story about rugby. I don't know much about rugby, but I had a fun time reading about the different positions! I also like that you didn't kill everyone off at the end like in the original. Nicely done and good luck with finals!

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